It's a good quote but an improvement would be to use lesser words
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nocturne trout
A shorter quote makes an easier time remembering
And it uses word plays
And I think the interpretation of '..life is like an obstacle..' contradicts the big, small and medium statement of it. Perhaps you could use 'life is filled with obstacles'.
Credits where it's due, the last line is already well made
rapid lintel
I appreciate the feedback thank you
nocturne trout
Sure, keep it up!
rapid lintel
Thank you! I'll try my best!