#Petrarchan sonnet:

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echo otter
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Days go by as I spend time aimlessly
Amongst the vast, wide crowd, I stand unknown
Compared to everyone, I look like a clone
Repeating the same old life endlessly

What gives me comfort, only holds me down
This embrace that seems to be warm and safe
Is just a chain that keeps myself in place
A pool of false pleasure, in which I drown
havent started on the volta yet tho SobbinTheLanaDelReyOut

desert pumice
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This poem is actually really good with strong imagery and emotion, keep it up!

echo otter
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omg ty i acc thought i didnt have enough imagery

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can i finish the volta and then get back to u?