#Seasons of Limerence

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valid ember
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A gaze enchanting a whole garden,
Refreshing like the spring season,
Even blooming flowers beg pardon,
To a disposition as sweet as fiction,

An absence chillier than winter,
Its frosty air begging for warmth,
In its emptiness she mourned,
So wintry that makes her shiver,

A presence melting a chilly ice,
Its warmth that's a feeling so nice,
Like a ray of light in summertime,
A feeling she longs everytime,

dire grail
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Wholesome 100! Love the nature and the delicate feel to the poem if that makes sense. The feeling of longing as well is really nice with the contrast between stanza 1 and 2!