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spare sparrow Jan 3, 2025, 2:51 PM

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beautifully written <3

rose plaza Jan 4, 2025, 3:07 PM

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Beautifully written Nohi 🪄

harsh mesa Jan 4, 2025, 3:32 PM

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the flow is very beautiful

barren rapids Jan 4, 2025, 6:32 PM

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this might be my favorite poem of yours so far !!

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i love the casual usage of dépaysement

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and “I sonder - why didn’t you?”

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a suggestion, i think you could actually split up the final thought even more to make it more dramatic :

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“hoping against
all odds”

rose plaza Jan 4, 2025, 9:23 PM

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You are welcome 03_heart_green_dontsteal

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