"I ain't coming back." | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

strange sluice · 2025-01-03T10:18:55.487Z

Wonderful! has just pregressed to **level 2**!

strange sluiceBOT Jan 3, 2025, 10:18 AM

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dull rapids Jan 3, 2025, 10:32 AM

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Woah it actually took you just one minute💀

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Lemme get back from work and ill read it

dull rapids Jan 3, 2025, 1:19 PM

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This poems raw too! And i actually liked the tone

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It goes back and forth between love-admiration and like frustration

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It adds layers to the complexity

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Very genuine! I love it

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You should work on structure once! To have a better flow and tighten up all the sentences that feels a bit disjointed rn, it would be nice and very clear

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Good one! mimu_salute_yessir

strange sluiceBOT Jan 5, 2025, 4:22 PM

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Wonderful! @pliant sorrel has just pregressed to level 4!

#"I ain't coming back."