Thats truly a terrific poem! I love it. And absolutely liked the way you reflected faith and love for answers in the tough times. Wonderful! The raw anger that you’ve added mixed with confusion is remarkable!
But there is one thing, maybe try to work on the refinement and structure a little bit. Overall the poem is good! Emotional core is very strong!
#little writing, (poem is a form of expression.)
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Though, you will have to take the poem down, im really sorry about that but the does have political undertones that too particularly in reference to attacks and violence. Its driven by personal emotion but we do not allow politics in the server just to dodge any potential arguments or heated debates, it could be controversial or upsetting to some people
Its a good poem though! I loved it
Yup! Its fully raw but thats what makes a poem very emotional and real
Hahaha
I get it
But its still better to be careful
You can save it tho, and if anyone is interested in reading you can jsut dm them!
Ofc!
Should i delete it from the server then? Are you okay with it
Thank you so much!
Its generally against the guidelines to post political content so we dont allow it but other stuff is fully accepted here
Do lemme know when you post a new poem! Id love to read it
;P
Its alright!
Take care buddy! Keep writing