#Anthem For Happiness

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radiant shard
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I like the tone

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Especially the final lines

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Lets score the victory we deserve and serve humanity for the first time once more

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Wonderful

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Yeah its like a push to act with a sense of duty

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Lemme read the other one too

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You absolutely are

stone canopy
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First of all, very smooth rhymes that makes the whole read quite enjoyable ngl. Thanks for letting me read!

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Something i like here are your application of slant rhymes in places as well, goes on pretty seamlessly

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Uh-huh

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Its a good one

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Keep writing

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Wow

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Thats quite impressive

orchid rover
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Loved this one too