Biological imagery haha
#Poultice For the Poisonous Infections
hard hemlock
I like the metaphor of a plug of well applied poetry as a poultice
Also the part where > the patch is a kind of humanity we've turned our back to
Its feels like a critical reflection on how we have neglected all theessential virtues
Pretty bold
There sure is an urgency for change
Do let me know when you post something new
Wont be much online but ill check whenever i get free
Keep writing man its beautiful
loud tiger
Its really good. I like your application of imagery as well! Keep going!
oak cove
this is beautifully written though i wonder about how effective the use of poultice as the band aid to society is. i feel you need something that targets the poison from deep inside; healing that reaches deeper down in each person and society
you describe the internal mess that is a human yet the cure feels superficial
last thorn
This is so good ♥️ nice metaphors