granite barn
.
Well, I
sense that
I can
trust
myself,
know I
can show,
record
what
I felt
afford
to make
words
bend
towards
the light:
I might
try and
save what
the moment
gave me;
the life
I’ve lived,
through it
I sift
to share
with you,
a gift:
my silly
soliloquies.
dusk fable
Although this piece of poetry has such an abstract and fragmented structure, what catches my attention the most - is the fact that my eyes seem to adapt and read even more closely than natural structure; perhaps thats the beauty of poetry. I enjoyed this poem that you have written :> Lovely wordplays and imageries to emphasise and evoke emotions