I write songs and was wondering if this could make a good haiku if I added to it more | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

rotund heath Dec 13, 2024, 8:54 PM

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You knew me from my veins to my cold heart
Now I’ve changed
Looks like I’ll need a restart
And I know you despise me, you withdrew
Your painting’s ruined and you’re all out of blue

low quest Dec 13, 2024, 8:58 PM

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WOAH

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❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹❤️‍🩹

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Realest of the real

rotund heath Dec 13, 2024, 9:00 PM

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i might just turn it into a song instead

low quest Dec 13, 2024, 9:02 PM

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This has poetic depth

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I really like the “your paintings ruined and you’re all out of blue” 😭❤️‍🩹 real

storm fieldBOT Dec 13, 2024, 9:03 PM

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*I really like the

“your paintings ruined and you’re

all out of blue” 😭❤️‍🩹 real*

low quest Dec 13, 2024, 9:03 PM

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I actually love all of this

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The metaphors are spot on

#I write songs and was wondering if this could make a good haiku if I added to it more