любимая (darling)

[dark briar]

call me from the blocks
i’ll look up at the window,
a lost dog in the snow.

in this cold night
wrapped in the streetlight’s glow
silence only broken by passing cars.

nothing is more endearing
than the dark circles beneath your eyes.
let me see you smile.

hold me when i cry
make it better, make it better
my head on your shoulder, любимая.

[calm furnace]

“wrapped in the streetlight’s glow” creates a beautiful sense of atmosphere

[civic hazel]

*“wrapped in the streetlight’s

glow” creates a beautiful

sense of atmosphere*

- apollesthai

[calm furnace]

i would suggest adding punctuation to better seperate your thoughts, since some lines seem to correlate to the ones following and others don’t