#A Writer's Elegy

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fiery kraken
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A man once said I've a poet's heart,
Unaware of the weight of his word,
A poet's heart indeed, I concurred.
For inside, the darkness plays its part.

A young girl said I've an artist’s mind,
I dare not argue nor disagree,
Like Van Gogh’s mind, mine slips from me,
Where vision and madness cruelly bind.

A writer told me I've a dreamer’s soul,
I nodded with a most heartfelt sigh,
For dreams, like Icarus, aim too high,
And shatter like waves on a distant shoal.

A sage once said I've visionary eyes,
I gave a thoughtful look and smiled,
For visions leave one feeling riled,
And truth can wear a subtle guise.

fiery jolt
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Nice and short, conveying a simple premise. I like it. The rhymes, the amount of verses and generally the entire message is extremely symmetrical, which is also pretty nice. Only thing I think you could improve is adding a meter, to give it a better flow.

fiery kraken
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@foggy salmon

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🙂