#the villain’s gift

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real hazel
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they called me kind, the selfless one,
a soul who’d never come undone.
but kindness bends, and kindness breaks—
even heroes have their stakes.

a joker’s laugh began to bloom,
when i gave joy and made more room,
for others’ needs, their endless cries,
while my own dreams met their demise.

a shattered heart, a broken will—
magneto’s rage began to spill.
"you’re meant to lead!" they claimed in jest,
yet used my strength, denied me rest.

for every "yes," a piece was torn,
like doctor doom, i was reborn.
a mind that served, a heart that bled,
turned cold as ice, as cold as dread.

they begged for light when days turned grim—
but i am no professor grimm.
i cannot stretch to meet the sky,
when my own spirit’s left to die.

with venom sharp as eddie’s bite,
i claimed my time, reclaimed my fight.
"they want your love," said shadows near,
"but feed their need, and you disappear."

so now, like loki, i choose the lies,
a smile false, deceitful guise.
call me your foe, your twisted bane,
but know the source of all this pain.

i am the villain, that’s your tale,
but was i not the one who’d bail
you out, each time you called for more,
until i broke, a hollow core?

so build your tower, cast your blame,
but every villain needs a name.
and mine’s the one who gave too much—
a symbiote of selfless touch.

robust gale
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Omg I love this one! The story is beautiful written and the emotions of the villain are really good expressed! Maybe you could structure it into some more paragraphs so it’s easier to read and the rhythm is more controllable but overall I really love it!! ❤️