#Echoes of love

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midnight ingot
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ohh dear
you gave reasons to despise the rain,
Yet, in each droplet's dance,
my heart found its melody .
You proclaimed the spring a falsehood
Yet, my love blossomed in every flower's

The moon, you declared, a mere illusion, a play,
Yet, within its craters,i found my language of love
People, you said, they are instant,
Yet, i fallen love with you .

not a mere instant you are , but a forever,
A stillness that time cannot shear off .
i love , i love and i love ,
Till bounds of love couldn't hold any longer

But my time as came dear !
The weight of the world,
Too much to hold
No choice but to depart my love
Else You may end up in this swirl

Ohh death ! My soul yearing to cage free
Yet my heart wanted to be caged with her
I fear no death , have tasted heaven ,
It echoes lingering in my ear ,
softly whispering "stay" .....

glass gust
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The poem is good but need some grammatical improvement