#people

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inner pagoda
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People may stare
People may laugh
People may talk behind your back
What is important is to be yourself
There are still people who will love you even if you don't Love yourself back

feral ledge
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To answer your question, this seems to be a free verse poem!

And in terms of improvement, the first two lines are great, and the third line can be shortened to match the first two, so it’s more… rhythmic.

Something like “People may gossip” may be better than “People may talk behind your back” as it matches the tempo of the first two lines.

In terms of the fourth and fifth line, I like the content. But if possible, express the same sentiments using less words, again to give the poem more tempo.

inner pagoda
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Oh ok thank you for your feedback I really appreciate it🫶