#Broken Mind, Broken Soul
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Broken Mind, Broken Soul
The trepidation that stems*
Excuse my typo
Edits
echo mantle
The rhytmn is quite complete at the beginning but slowly breaks always after your distinct play of Enjambments (though I think its meant to be "SHATTERING"), the poem is a narrative and explores the mental turmoil faced by a person. The slightly broken structure lends its hands to the breaking aspect of the poem. And the ending line by isolating "probably" seems to be a suggestion to emphasise the unexpectness of the entirety of life..
Your edit of the last line to "right?" emphaises that one has almost no choice but to accept. It gives the ending a tone of acceptance albeit unwilling