#Delusional (VeX)

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icy zodiac
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Delusional, these lies;
Not one worth a dime!
But none were as bad,
Bad, as that of time!

vale raft
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I think it's really good! The only thing I recommend is maybe losing the "of" in the last sentence. It makes it a bit hard to read due to the extra syllable. Its really good!!!