copper garnet
So first of all, I'm very sorry for being inactive in the community. I've been busy with school, and the piling of assignments. I've also been going through a writer's block. I would like feedback on this unfinished poem, and ideas on how to finish it. I appreciate any feedback, whether it be good or bad.
Anyways, here is the poem:
Life throws problems straight into our faces.
Why try to solve it, if you don't know the outcome?
Life isn't like math.
You can solve a math problem, and have an answer sheet that tells you if you're correct or not. Yet life doesn't.
Each step you make to solve a solution, is being done blindly.
You don't know when you'll be taking the last step.
You don’t know if you're taking the correct step.
Please help me, by giving me ideas/inspiration and feedback!
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