Even in space

[fiery narwhal]

Beauty takes human form in her
The girl who makes me feel like me
A feeling that’s warm and cozy
Like cuddling by the fire
Like hot chocolate on a cold winters day.

The way her brown hair falls perfectly
How her eyes crinkle when she smiles
Her beautiful beautiful Mind
My gosh is she smart

I want her in a way I struggle to describe
Long conversations about nothing
Celebrations and happiness over everything
I want to be there for her
In the way the rings never leave Saturn.

We are two stars dangling in the sky
Even the closest ones are worlds apart
But I’m still shining my light
Helping her see what lays beneath

[stable cedar]

I like this. One technical comment, line 10, which starts "I want her in a way," is excessively long, maybe because the word "Long" is capitalized, you missed a line break. Otherwise, around 14-16 syllables, you should likely move the line over and indent it and keep it lowercase to show that it is a continuation of the line. (There's nothing wrong with an excessively long line.) Keep it up.