#Love's Paradox

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unreal juniper
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Tell me what do you think is love, is it just a feeling that one feels or more than I can comprehend,
Love is something I want to feel, not with just anyone but you, truly you make me feel more than I can ever think.
No its not your beauty that captured me, but your personality that captivated me, your love is such a steal,
If its your love that you give me, I shall receive if its poison that you give me, I shall drink.

Tell me is it truly love I seek or infatuation that I feel,
I love you,is that what you wanted to hear? Not from me but perhaps the person that you seek.
Truly I've continously loved you,but you continued turning blind and i can't help but feel like a fool,
Am I a jester in your eyes that everything i say makes you laugh, truly can you not feel my sincerity?

Love, love, love tell me why you have to enchant me, could you have not rejected me and made me feel?
Tell me, why is it that I seek your warmth, a hex upon my heart to bear as punishment for my sins?
Love,love,love truly you've made me blind and covered my eyes with your lies,
I wish you would tell me that you love me, yet you only hold onto me when you no longer feel your worthy.

Hate oh how I absolutely detest you, truly tell me my dear is that what I really feel?
I can't help but wish you want me by your side,but truly you only want me to make you feel right.
No, oh no, please don't make me hope anymore I no longer want to think that you love me more,
Cry, oh the tears of sorrow, my dear I plead to not leave my side, I vow to love you so please remain

As I write my feelings in my book, I conceal my emotions with each stroke,
I will remain still by your side, hoping one day you'd open your eyes
This writer that once was loved by all, now who will love you forever more,
This writer is tired so I bid adieu, please be happy and continue to grow.
Sincerely loved by one and all, this is your lover signing off

cerulean trout
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It was a little bit of a hard read. It didn’t really flow the way that I thought it would. By changing a few sentence and focusing on the rhythm it might make it even better. Good job! Keep up the good work!

random obsidian
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Read the first like 3 stanzas and I can summarize it in one: those we love don't love us; they love those whom doesn't to them. It's a paradox — I can feel it for ya, it always happens with me