Shes stuck on my mind
i’m in such a bind
cant stop thinkin of her
wanted to be forever intertwined
our relationship wasn't perfect
shes living rent free on my mental
I loved and I still love her
but thats confidential
our meeting, coincidental
falling in love was accidental
whatever her and I have
now feels oh so sentimental
we both got temperamental
but I love her so much
no not incremental
she wasn't just ornamental
cant stop thinking about her
and I cant lie its so detrimental
her presence so instrumental
you know who you are
sorry I couldn't make
something a little more clever
you were my depressant suppressor
whichever, whoever, wherever, whatever
ill love you forever
hope you end up happily ever after
with future endeavors
#Titleception?
modern galleon
hasty shore
I like this poem. Although I feel as though you could remove either "She's suck on my mind" or "can't stop thinking about her" or "can't stop thinkin of her" .They're all very similar lines and I think you only need one to get your point across. The repetition of 'confidential', 'accidental', 'sentimental', etc. Is a bit of a drag if you get what I mean. Maybe you could try an ABAB rhyming scheme to add a little more interest. I would also recommend using more metaphors to replace 'love', I think its a little bit overused. Good job though! (sorry I hope that doesn't sound mean)