Snow flakes

[acoustic oracle]

Its well written! But there are some minor mistakes..

May I point them out?

[grim gazelle]

*I would love if you

did (I’m dyslexic so I

do mistakes often😅)*

- sarahj2060

[acoustic oracle]

Ohhh

Its totally alright!

Overall you wrote very well

Hmmm for this line. "As I'm still clinging all the snowflakes"

This is grammatically wrong

The correct sentence would be

As I'm clinging on to all the snowflakes or As I'm clinging to the snowflakes

😁your welcome!

Theres no flaw in the writing its just that u need to focus on grammatical errors thats all

Spelling is perfect and i can very well see how the poem is related to the title

^^

Keep it up!