O Perseus

[gloomy snow]

dont tag me w/o my perm i js told thonos this 😭

its alr

[glass tinsel]

It's a very interesting one!! I like how you can play with words and expressions like ''melancholic fragments of life once created by your words'' !! You've got lots of potential

is this your first poem?

I see! I wouldve been surprised if that was your first, its soo good

[topaz vale]

"blinded battalion,” “warm blisters of freedom’s incarnations,” its greatttt

one suggestion would be to add line breaks for better structure

like
Breathe in—warm blisters of freedom's incarnations.
Hear them chant your death,
Melancholic fragments of life once created by your words,
Now seek your reflection in the shattered land of misfortune.

(i keep forgetting shift+enter thing)

say it what you want haha

its greattt, you did a goob job at creating images with your words and references

thanks for tagging me