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edgy sable
@carmine grove
carmine grove
Short and so so sweet. A very delicate love poem with powerful imagery.
I think the 3rd and 4th lines could be improved to mirror the fluidity of the rest of the poem. Maybe something like
“I can’t close my eyes
and abandon the sparkle in your own
out of fear their absence
will only rip my heart apart”