#chameleon

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vapid shard
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you'd never know who i am
if only you would ask
brand new wings come on out
from the skin you'd forget to touch

i could change like a chameleon
at the sound of your voice
if all you gave me
was your words in choice

let me morph into
your favorite regret
become the ghost you knew
too well to forget

finally we may see
what you became of thee
hold my misshapen bones
and bring my heart on home

glass pulsar
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let me morph into your favorite regret🔥🔥 spectacular line, you have a good melancholy tone going on, you could definitely benefit from some out punctuation to show line breaks/breath, and the use of thee doesn't fit with the language of the rest of your poem, I like this one though!💜