#Him or Her?

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old hemlock
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@fluid wagon

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@hoary helm
@narrow grail
@deep cargo

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@dense horizon

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Thoughts and opinions would be very much appreciated.
Suggestions are also very welcome!!!

fluid wagon
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1 : I love the art at the bottom there! It's really sweet.
2 : The rhymes are succinct, too. Keeping it simple.
3 : The messages here are sweet to read, too.
4 : The imagery is also nice - though I suggest you really express the love themes!
5 : I love the repetition + change of context of the question!

Overall ?
You really did something well here!