#Affection

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sweet jacinth
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The first time we met
she seemed to me wise
never felt love
but that moment i might
was i funny was i weird
cuz why her smile
just kept staring
at my eyes

she spoke to me later
we talked for a while
she then asked me my name
i fumbled , cant define
but i kinda made her smile
is all i recollect now
i laughed at myself then
she was way too fine

warped lake
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wow i was really moved by the emotions you conveyed in your poem. The way you described the moment was so vivid and heartfelt. Keep writing from the heart and keep improving! “never felt love, but that moment i might” RAHHH