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maiden cosmos Jun 30, 2024, 10:41 AM

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That ending was great

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its either a complex rhyming scheme and I didn't know, or its inconsistent. If its the latter then make sure to keep your rhyming a little consistent.

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Otherwise its difficult to read

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I see, I see

full auroraBOT Jun 30, 2024, 10:44 AM

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Wonderful! @hard thicket has just pregressed to level 2!

maiden cosmos Jun 30, 2024, 10:45 AM

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Poetry is meant to be read outloud, so when you rhyme at the end of a poem, it should be consistent or otherwise it becomes hard to read, an example can the ABAB rhyme scheme.

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Yeah ofc, but there's a few lines that are off, it might be intentional but I am not sure

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It doesn't have to a perfect rhyme, just close enough

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