#A nuisance questioning

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misty sable
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Despite you loving me, despite you caring for me,
Some will wait for you, though it's sad to see.

        **"I feel I'm not worthy of you,"**

I confess,

   **"Are you gaslighting yourself?"**

I gently press.

"I am treating you right, can't you see?
For you to keep loving me, I set you free."

Until one has left, an act of flight,

          **"Don't worry, those are lies,"**

I say, holding me tight.

        ***"For others will be a better fit,

Despite me being a misfit."***

          ***"For I am just a nuisance that needs to get rid,

Despite me being a piece of sht."**

         **"Do you love me still?"**

I ask, eyes downcast,

"For I overthink each sequence, memories vast."

    *"Not gonna lie, I feel foolish,"*

I whisper in the still,

"For writing these feelings, I use this quill."

             ***"I love you,"***

you say, firm and clear,

"Every word you write, every fear.
In each sentence, your heart I see,
You're not a burden, you're everything to me."

misty sable
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proven remnant
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interesting wording

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not my kind of poem but i like the conversational idea behind yours

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i still however think the wording is a tincy bit odd

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at some parts

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though this is just a me thing

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i think "gaslighting" and "not gonna lie" is a little odd