#2 "we are sand" | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

grizzled heron Jun 25, 2024, 1:48 AM

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this is a poem about my experience of Dissociative Identity Disorder (DID) it is the second poem in a collection about my DID. I am posting it in a picture format because I am not sure if the formating would carry over to discord.

calm pine Jun 25, 2024, 2:04 AM

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this is so awesome....

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hold on, i will come back to this when ive thought ab it deeper and then i will post feedback : >

grizzled heron Jun 25, 2024, 2:13 AM

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calm pine this is so awesome....

Thank you! I will be awaiting your feedback

glass gazelle Jun 25, 2024, 9:17 AM

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I don’t know if there is much feed back I can give in this, seems good as it is.

grizzled heron Jun 26, 2024, 12:27 AM

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glass gazelle I don’t know if there is much feed back I can give in this, seems good as it is.

that is still helpful info for me! I am trying to find out if the poem is lacking somewhere and outside opinions are helpful!

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I also feel like it is complete but I was not sure if there was something I am missing

glass gazelle Jun 26, 2024, 1:03 AM

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I like it

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Especially the formatting and stuff

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Really adds uniqueness

grizzled heron Jun 26, 2024, 1:06 AM

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yeah it is the first poem that I played with formatting in

##2 "we are sand"