#Aquarium.
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man, i can feel the heartbreak in this poem. i love how u used this aquarium as a metaphor for a relationship, and i really love the lines " I am sorry I am not colourful enough to be in your aquarium"
it reminds me of the feeling of never being enough
i am actually impressed by how much u were able to transfer the heartbreak from urself to the reader thru this poem