#The Theatre

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quasi geode
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Very labored

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peanut gallery is a super old reference

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and not clear

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honest the dishonest is not really suppported

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creative and critical

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The language is but high and latinate like superfluous and also reference bard peanut gallery

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I think you're delineating and maybe within the metaphor of theatre

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I feel like you painted yourself into a corner with the first stanza

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I wouldn't use philistine in this political environment