#Flowers

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heady hawk
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Blooming in the night
Like a silent sleepy yawn
Nobody knew what happened
Nobody heard a sound
Blooming in the night
Does a tree falling make a sound
If nobody heard it fall?
A beauty of a rose
Blooming in the night
A flower blocked from light
He dies in that forest
He wilted out of sight
Blooming in the night
I saw him in the forest
Light drained from his eyes
I watered him that night
Blooming in the night
He just barely survived
I helped him escape that night

I hope that he's okay now-

Up in heaven

Made of light...

kind hemlock
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This honestly deserves a grammy more than Flowers by Miley Cyrus 😭

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Okay so I'm sure I'll like actually understand this upon further reads

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I think the repetition sort-of works but idk if you ever wanted to play around with typography I'd probably somehow distinguish the "blooming in the night" lines like give them quotations or make them bold or something

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I'm going to like actually give it a further look and analysis now though

heady hawk
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I agree, I might edit in the future