Good poem !!
#From Now On
solemn glacier
ocean shadow
Umm I feel there are a few nitpicks like (s1 l1, its fall dim (preferably)). But the poem itself is really well put out. Grammar is minimal, but I beg to differ. The formatting I love, personally. You could benefit from introducing rhythm in this, flow is almost nil here. I give it 7/10, and sure you should continue!
candid silo
For years and years i craved their cheers [...]
This really sounds like something a neglected person would say. Ion know, i'm just stuck on these two verses
7/10 