Would It? -Rider | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

wet basin May 26, 2024, 11:15 AM

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@scenic locust @green knot @rocky dome

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@gaunt dagger @dusty finch @stoic sparrow

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@honest spear @faint wedge

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@snow pumice @glass spear @stoic sparrow

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@brisk jacinth @dusty pivot

stoic sparrow May 26, 2024, 5:05 PM

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I like the vivid imagery and metaphors, phrases like "weep in red or gray", "embrace the starts" and "fuel the flames inside" pain striking pictures which effectively convey the emotional weight. It's rhythmic and the flow is nice. The use of repetition emphasizes the central theme. It captures a range of emotions, from longing and hope, to fear and doubt. Overall, it's a reflective piece which is beautifully crafted. Good job once again. heart

stoic sparrow May 27, 2024, 1:06 PM

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this is so satisfying to read, so beautiful and relatable, good job rider!, its great

wet basin May 27, 2024, 2:56 PM

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@ocean birch

glass spear May 27, 2024, 2:59 PM

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SO DAMN GOOD 😭
The imagery, the usage of words, metaphors, flow... Truly magnificent. Loved it. DAMN LOVED IT. 'Tis simply beautiful!

ocean birch May 27, 2024, 3:11 PM

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Finally a simpler poem for me to understand now yippee

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Beautiful as usual hooray

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