your memory I'll still greet is tortured
#Parallel Lines
vast summit
I'd like to see some reference to mathematical thinking
Like parallel lines, / that never co-inside / passing mathematically unseen / known as virbations alone //
I'm not sure that's any better
worthy havenBOT
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vast summit
It's not really notes, it's a reaction reading poetry triggers me to echo
foggy hollow
it feels a bit abrupt when it changes from "we" to "she"
Also, the first paragraph needs some work on the wording, other then that I think the concept you have in mind is really good