This is your first poem??? This is wonderful!
#The Memories of Blades.
torn light
I've definitely not seen a topic like this one, so it's already very unique (as opposed to all the poetry here that's about love and heartbreak--not that there's anything wrong with those, necessarily).
Keep up the good work and keep growing 
amber edge
This poem is awesome!!! I love the idea of a personification of a blade 🥰 (at least thats how I interpreted it)
void narwhal
I can listen samehada reciting this for some reason
Nd swords of mist hehe
Either way nice work