brittle aspen
This is an interesting theme, I like it.
One suggestion (that's very minor, because maybe you intended it) is in the second line of the second stanza. Maybe you meant to say that you "faint," as "feint" means to deceive or pretend.
Other than that, this is a nice poem. Short and sweet. I especially like the first line of the third stanza, it just hit different LOL
past belfry