#Devdas Story

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tribal knoll
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@proper shuttle

proper shuttle
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Love the story telling good job

chilly notch
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I absolutely adore this work!! Your word play and raw emotions peaking right out of each verse really intrigues me. I believe you have beautifully embraced the story in your own serenity. I think the ending can be more powerful if you go for another draft. Of course if you're satisfied with it then that's also great :))