Heart

[tawny obsidian]

You're strong yet fickle
One moment resolved
The next, a cripple

My feelings, they sway
Dance and betray
The source of joy
But the cause of pain

My life and you
Entwined, one and two
Beating and breathing

Keep me feeling

[steel tiger]

Yeah

short and good one

the feedback I would give is
Heart and emotions are very potent
and you can make complex and large poem

so try to expand this poem if it is possible for you

but this poem is relatable and good

try also using sophisticated Vocabulary