Silent Consumption: Earth Fell Behind Icarrion | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

quaint mulch Apr 1, 2024, 2:09 PM

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i wrote this about TB and how it still prevails in impoverished communities. Just need feedback.

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is it good enough for a poetry competition, I don't wanna embarrass myself

exotic sage Apr 1, 2024, 2:25 PM

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I think it's good and it sounds very clever though also strange to me because... I don't know what TB is

quaint mulch Apr 1, 2024, 2:25 PM

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Tuberculosis

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and consumption is other word for it

exotic sage Apr 1, 2024, 2:26 PM

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Well this just made a whole lot more sense lol

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I think it is good enough and I really like the parts after "the ancient aristocrat of all aches"

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