I like the poem! I think something I recommend is that you use enjambment or something to break the lines for a better read. One small issue I find reading here is that it can get overwhelming at times. But this is my nit-pick, overall it's a very nice poem.
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frank nexus
Oh! No problem.
Let me show you.
I'll use your lines here.
you'll be surprised to know that once upon a time i too could bloom flowers of love
You could phrase it as
You'll be surprised to know that
once upon a time,
I too could bloom flowers of love
It gives the lines more of a visual appeal.
And more emphasis in their meaning.
You'll learn as you go.
As of right now? You have the ideas for writing.
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frank nexus
._. anyways
If you channel them right, then it'd come off as even more -
Powerful and concise.
You can still put them all in one line, there's no issue.
This is just what I am used to reading.
No problem! I'm looking forward to see you grow!
Yes.
Oh, that's normal for writers. I do that on occasion.