#Here I am

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solid wave
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See the light and it's blinding
who woulda thought truth would be this misguiding
Cant say this is where I thought id find myself
Break me loose, put my chains on the shelf
Cause I dont wanna see the night envelope
all that ive fought to develope

Stared the void in its eyes
fed me millions of lies
Comfort in my veins, can say with hubris that I was probably insane

But here I am, in the now
though my mentals kinda unsound
Gotta look around
Can't lose it now, gotta keep my vow
in which I hold myself

Dont wanna put my life on the shelf
but its kinda hard when im strugging for wealth
Is it worth it? I guess ill find out

prime spoke
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Hubris is the correct spelling, I think maybe "can't lose it now, gotta keep the vow" is better wording if you like that

Love your poem by the way. It's exactly the kind of poems I love! 💜

solid wave
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I appreciate you

prime spoke
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I'm happy you appreciate me