Crush(ed) | The Art of Poetry | Page 1

rocky tangle Mar 16, 2024, 3:24 AM

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I'm sort of rusty and tired, it was actually way better with way more clever rhymes and imagery but i was working when i was thinking and forgot on the drive home 😅

dim wave Mar 16, 2024, 3:26 AM

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I felt very sad reading this :(

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It feels visceral certainly and I like how it tells a cohesive story

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albeit a sad one

rocky tangle Mar 16, 2024, 3:28 AM

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Should i have put it in sensitive poetry or said its sad?

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But also thank you 😊

dim wave Mar 16, 2024, 3:29 AM

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It probably should? i'm not sure, but regardless, I do like it! Again, I really like its' flow. From each sentence to the next, it builds, and I very much enjoy that about it!

rocky tangle Mar 16, 2024, 3:30 AM

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Ill repost it in there just in case

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