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*Love the idea,
it does seem a little hard
to follow for me*
- peinizalotta
Yeah!
I love your laugh lines
let me in between your lies
Those two lines seem out of place. I’m having a hard time understanding the meaning of the poem.
Also at the end of the first stanza
to understand I could never be
What are you referring to never being?
This definitely makes more sense! I guess I was just having some issues with it. Thank you for explaining