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mental crater
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Love the idea, it does seem a little hard to follow for me

patent bearBOT
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*Love the idea,

it does seem a little hard

to follow for me*

mental crater
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Yeah!

I love your laugh lines
let me in between your lies

Those two lines seem out of place. I’m having a hard time understanding the meaning of the poem.

Also at the end of the first stanza

to understand I could never be
What are you referring to never being?

mental crater
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This definitely makes more sense! I guess I was just having some issues with it. Thank you for explaining