#the Resident

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strange meadow
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I think it meets the criteria

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but what is surprising use of words?? if u could specify

lapis crescent
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Hmmm this is good, but I wouldn't say exceptional in my most humble opinion lol, I feel like in some areas it doesn't flow right maybe a few rhymes here and there may help, but if you were going for a non-rhyming poem that's fair, I like the use of urban before suburb with the repetition of the "uh" though and I do like the imagery in the last stanza