how beautiful a love, is one that moves an artist to write and a poet to draw.
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[do i leave it at that? do i continue on? i don’t even know where to go from here, it just feels so concise to me.]
#birds swim / fish sing
wheat vapor
haughty hollow
Yeah, I'm not sure it's punchy enough to be on its own. Maybe this could be the first in a series? I'm thinking about one I wrote that had five different little poems that were no more than a third of a page long.
fast mango
Sublime, and I like the natural order of this also. In correlating a certain indicative way of birds flowing through the air freely to sing or swim and fish also flowing hidden to swim or sing(we wouldn't know or recognize unless we were close to the ocean or fish, ect.). But how the natural order compliments each other though they are both prime examples for each action. Anyways, that's my over analyzed approbation. There is beauty is sublimation and ambiguity.