carmine sky
I must! exclaimed he
Vomiting words into paper
Whyn't perfect?
Ink to the finest drop:
Of all possible imageries
write, write, write
Betwixt he says!
Too weak?
Too cliche?
Spelling mistake?
Shall I resume?
perfect, perfect, perfect
"Thy foreign face
is nothing but
memory:
Do I touch thy
mighty courage?"
archaic, archaic, archaic
Improper formatting,
incorrect archaic use,
no need for the colon,
this has no meaning,
You have no talent!
don't write, write, don't write.
charred zephyr
merry fossil
lilac rover