#Valentine's Day Oh Valentine's Day (Sonnet)

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bright pumice
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Valentine's Day Oh Valentine's Day (Sonnet)

Valentine's Day oh Valentine's Day
Wake me up in the morning til sunset
Tell me you love me, my crush of harlem
Tell me you will appear before my eyes !

I'll tell you I'll love you when love bugs fly !
Give me chocolates and give me love
Show me the truth and love of your heart
Take my hand woman take me home

Take me to the house where we'll roam all night
Take me to the mall and dress me up babe
Buy me food and show me cool stuff baby
Remember Valentine's Day the coolest day

Remember me oh girl you are my sweet crush
Kiss me goodbye my sweetheart of forever love

short gale
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i am a fan of Sonnet Structure, and i say that you have utilized the structure very well. it could have used a much formal words and language, though. nonetheless, this is one of the fewer Blank-versed Sonnets that have caught my eye. keep up the good work COFFEEEow