#i became your leftovers

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summer echo
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i love the message of this poem, your use of words that are typically used when describing food going bad to highlight the title is amazing!

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i would try to incorporate some more grammar at the end of/within lines to emphasize different lines/tones that you want emphasized.

brave vale
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Truly a piece of art, one I love with all my heart, despite just having met, if possible allow me to lend this love being ready to be spent.

plush rover
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I love this! It's utterly despairing being forsaken by a loved one, but you turned that tragedy into poetry. Amazing work and hope your okay!!