#i became your leftovers
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i would try to incorporate some more grammar at the end of/within lines to emphasize different lines/tones that you want emphasized.
Truly a piece of art, one I love with all my heart, despite just having met, if possible allow me to lend this love being ready to be spent.
I love this! It's utterly despairing being forsaken by a loved one, but you turned that tragedy into poetry. Amazing work and hope your okay!!